Museum and Art Galleries should concentrate on work that show history and culture of their own country rather than work of the other part in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mesuem

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Museum

is the place where the ancient stuff

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kept and shown to tell the story about

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history

. It is controversial that the nation art galleries should more focus on presenting only the national

history

and

culture

compared to showing the story of other interesting things of other countries in the world. In my opinion, I totally agree that the

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museum

should show their particular own historical and cultural issues due to promoting tourists, and The

first

reason why the national art galleries should concentrate only

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own stuff is a

tourist

attraction. As

foriegners

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foreigners

have to travel to the place in order to visit

such

a unique museum, which is solely located in that country, the

tourist

sector of the particular country can generate enormous income from

tourist

.

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, according to the information from

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Thailand's

tourist

sector, 80% of

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come to Thailand due to visiting Wat

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and can generate enormous income as

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spend

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their money buying food, booking hotels, and doing other activities.

Therefore

, making

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museum

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a unique place to visit can be beneficial to the

tourist

sector.

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, another reason for concentrating only

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cultural things is to conserve the nation

history

and

culture

for the young generation.

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, the student can learn how to cook

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traditional Thai foods

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and learn how Thai people live in the past through visiting the ancient city in Samutprakarn province. For

this

reason, children will know and remember how their

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live and can distribute it to other

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to conserve it

further

. In conclusion, according to attracting

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coming to the countries, which result in generating substantial income, along with conserving

culture

and

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for the future generation to not let it fade away, I strongly admit that

mesuem

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museum

museums

and art galleries should focus on their own

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history

and

culture

.