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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

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Advertisements have become one of the most important marketing strategies in the
last
 decade. Many products are renewed to meet the customers'
need
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. In my opinion, it is a negative development. In
this
 essay, I will highlight the reasons and outline the ramifications. On one hand, advertising is recognised as a process to enhance product sales. Many companies renovate their items to stay ahead of their competitors as well as to fit the customers'
need
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.
For instance
, there are new advertising techniques focused on the brand new generation of Apple phones, how it has a dual camera for capturing picturesque landscapes and
it's
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 new stainless steel frame for additional protection.
Moreover
, it has a
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 cross-up tracker that ensures the customer's privacy. Businessmen entice individuals to purchase these
device's
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. In turn, they generate massive sales and make more profit. On the flip side, brands promotion creates a dire need to purchase by creating a good image in the viewers' perspective and urge them to buy the item.
This
 has a negative drawback because many consumers are on a tight budget,
additionally
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 they are struggling to raise
fund
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 to take up something that they don't really need.
For example
, my brother has bought an Apple phone
the
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last
 couple of months. He was financially disabled,
however
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 he got it just for showing off. In conclusion, brand promotion by confirming that the product is renewed has been seen to benefit the businesses by soaring its earnings. It has
a negative effects
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a negative effect
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 on consumers and led to financial hardships.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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