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After completing graduation in Anthropology from a tertiary educational institute, learners are associated in several working sectors with different
range
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of salaries, which have been illustrated by the given pie chart after five years of experience. Overall, 88
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accounts for salaried persons and 12
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students
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remain unemployed.
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, more than half of the total section are full-time workers and rest are working for
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time in a day, in which information about 8% student
are
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not available. Most of the peers have been associated with the government sector and
also
obtaining a significant cash amount as their salary, which is above one lakh
dollar
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. It is consist of the highest percentage share (50% precisely) as compare to
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two sectors. Pupils who are working as
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freelance consultants are receiving a handsome income and only 5% among them have been paid less than fifty thousand
dollar
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; whereas, 40% have crossed above $100000. In private companies below
one
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third
people
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are getting
this
amount and most
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are in the income group of $50000 to $74999.
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