In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
These days, few countries are witnessing a rise in the median weight of their citizens followed by a decline in well-being and physical
fitness
. One of the major influential factors is everyone are liking fried foods rather than home food. One possible solution to Use synonyms
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is making them understand its effects over a long time on themselves.
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To begin
with, there are few major factors that are causing the fat to surge especially in developing countries. Linking Words
Firstly
, Quick bites are the most common cause. Nowadays, there are a plethora of options available Linking Words
however
which are not healthy. Linking Words
Moreover
, people are still driven towards it. Owing to the fact that, everyone loves it even after knowing its effects on Linking Words
fitness
is the biggest contributor . Use synonyms
Secondly
, many of these dishes are deep-fried in high-fat oil. Linking Words
Consequently
, it started spiking the blood cholesterol which is Linking Words
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For instance
, KFC is an apt example in Linking Words
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scenario. Due to the fact that it provides only crispy dishes which many presume savoury made it to be the biggest seller. To sum up, bad food habits play a major role in body Linking Words
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On the other hand
, children getting addicted to these at a very young age. Primarily, it is being done in fast-moving cities where parents could not spend ample dedication towards cooking healthy meals. Linking Words
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, children too are loving it without any complaints. Linking Words
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to it, they are available in a great number of varieties.Linking Words
As a result
, though changes are not instant they act similar to the slow poison which would have a drastic effect at a certain point. To illustrate Linking Words
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further
, carbonated soft drinks which have high amounts of sugar get accumulated in the body and begin fluctuating body sugar levels. Linking Words
Subsequently
, has a significant impact on the weight of individuals and their well-being as well.
To summarize, the drastic changes in health, Linking Words
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and weight of an individual are Use synonyms
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lifestyle
life style
they are preferring. It can be developed by consuming healthy Correct your spelling
lifestyle
home cooked
food, avoiding carbonated Add a hyphen
home-cooked
dinks
and fried dishes. Though these changes are small, their advantages will be great.Correct your spelling
drinks
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