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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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As can be seen, almost every piece of
news
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 we see today originally comes from the journalist's reports.
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, there is still some
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 that we could not 100% rely on them as there are some behind the scenes over
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news
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.
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, we should really rely on the
journalists
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 who brought the
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 from actual sources and do not report any biased
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 about the
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.
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 of all, we know that not all
journalists
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 give the right
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 to the public, for some of the
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 they gathered are not reliable and invalidated.
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, the
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 they report is sometimes based on their investigation, which makes the viewers misunderstand.
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, a journalist from a TV channel reported that lemonade juice creates more immunity for the covid-19 disease.
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, a doctor announced that
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news
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 is fake.
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, there are many other
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 reporting biased
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, due to the influences by the other people behind the scene,
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 as celebrities, politicians, or millionaires.
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, during the crime scene of the death of a Thai actress, the
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 tried to lie to the audiences that she died from the overdose of barbiturates drugs;
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, when time passes by, the same
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 was being reported again that she was murdered. In conclusion, we can see that not all
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 around us are 100% correct due to the error
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 gained by the
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.
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, there are some famous people behind the scenes that pay extra money for these
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 for concealing their falses.
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