You see an advertisement for a product. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend where you saw the advertisement Describe the product Explain why your friend should buy this product.

Dear Jenny, How are you? I remember you are finding a gift for your sister at her housewarming party. I want to share with you an advertisement for a robot vacuum - a brand new product of Dyson- that I have come across, hoping you find it helpful.
Last
night, when I was watching my favourite movie on YouTube, I accidentally saw
this
advertisement which immediately caught my attention. Basically, the advert shows a robot that automatically vacuums and cleans the house. It has sensors that allow it to move around the house
while
avoiding obstacles, like furniture, walls and stairs.
Additionally
, it can be controlled by using a smartphone app which helps users to start and stop cleaning sections.
Although
this
product was launched to the market just two weeks ago, its sales volume is really high. It has received a perfect 5-star rating for its quality. Most users comment that it really simplifies the cleaning tasks, helping them to have more time with their friends and family,
instead
of cleaning their house. What’s more, the price is quite reasonable at just $300, especially when compared to other Dyson offerings. The seller has a store in Metrotown. How about if we come there to take a closer look? Just let me know and we can choose a time that works for both of us. Lots of love, Lana
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and stick to it throughout. While your letter does this well, making even clearer connections can enhance readability and impact.
task achievement
Provide more detail about the product features and how they specifically could benefit your friend. This deepens the personal connection and relevance, making your recommendation more compelling.

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