you are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. you would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter. . ask about the school . say what kind of accommodation you want . mention any special requests you have (for example diet)

Dear

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/madam, My name is Luna from India, I have recently registered as a student of your school in Melbourne for the following four-week course of Advanced English course,

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will start

at the end

of October

this

year. I would like to ask about your school's performance than other schools,

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structure and syllabus too. I would be grateful if you could send the details about the school. I expect the accommodation near to your academy because I do not like to much more travel. I would like to stay with the host family because I think that will be helpful for learning English like a native speaker,

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will

helpful

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for our academic performance too. That's why I

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expect

this

. I

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following a diet here for several months and I could be continued there

also

when I will reach. I would be grateful if you could arrange the facilities for my diet accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you, Your's

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, Luna.