In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
All over the world, there are some nations
is
considering having Change the verb form
are
own
house Correct pronoun usage
their own
that is
better than where they have to spend much money to rent monthly for their existence. In my perspective, I will be discussing the reason for it and I will describe the drawbacks of having a house.
To begin
with, living in a house are
accessible to connect a relationship which can Change the verb form
is
built
the emotional relation between elderly person and adolescence. Normally, most citizens like to live in the comfort zone where they have been and be familiar environment, particularly, older people and children. Change the verb form
be built
For instance
, if they must change promptly their location, they are nervous. They have to take time for
Change preposition
to
adaptation
their lifestyle in a new environment and being a problem healthy. Replace the word
adapt
In contrast
, renting one will provide much
facilities which attract most Change the quantifier
many
of
Change preposition
apply
teenagers
Add an article
the teenagers
such
as gym
, swimming pool as well as security. Correct article usage
a gym
Also
, in term
of renting Fix the agreement mistake
terms
an
accommodation will be Correct article usage
apply
burden
Add an article
the burden
a burden
of
Change preposition
on
owner
.
Add an article
the owner
Nonetheless
, purchasing a habitation maybe
facing a problem in not having enough currency as they need to loan and it Correct your spelling
may be
also
has the highest interest. For example
, if they are facing an unexpected event in other words
accident, somethings
that be necessary immediately including healthy. Correct your spelling
some things
In addition
, new
Add an article
the new
a new
graduate
should not buy Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
an
accommodation because they still gain a less salary which is not suitable for them.
To summarise, nations consider having a home because elderly people and teenagers are happy but they will have owed. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, they should have a plan for Add an article
an expense
the expense
expense
that be possible.Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
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