Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him giving information about the town. In your letter include : 1. what is the good time for visit? 2. describe some interesting places to visit 3. what accomodation is better for his stay?
Dear Guri,
I hope you are doing amazing in your life. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about your plan to visit my hometown this
weekend with some information regarding your trip.
Firstly
, I would say the best time
for your tour is the summer as there are a lot of activities you can do while
visiting there. There are a lot of places you can have fun while
traveling including religious and food places. We have Golden Temple the best place to visit, it is a Sikh Gurudwara Sahib where anyone can go and spend time
while
listening to Gurbani Kirtan and also
you can find peace over there. Moreover
, you can also
have a tour of Jalianwala Bagh which is preserved in the memories of people who died there. Other places are Sada Pind to have fun and explore the cultural things that are disappearing nowadays.
Furthermore
, you can travel to Wagha Border, where you can see the performance of both the Indian and Pakistan armies doing parades and other activities. Additionally
, there are seating arrangements for people who go there and want to enjoy the moment and have fun, also
they cheer their army. In addition
, I believe the best place to live there during your visit is my home. If you will stay with me at my house, we can spend time
together after it's been a long time
we have not met. otherwise
, you can also
stay at hotels as there are a lot of accommodations you can find easily on the Internet before your travel. Also
, you can live at Gurdwara Sahib as there are free rooms available with food which you can eat anytime.
I hope this
information will help you. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your Friend,
DamanSubmitted by damandhillon75026 on
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coherence and cohesion
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task achievement
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task achievement
The letter provides a warm and engaging tone, which is very suitable for a letter to a friend.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and set the right tone for the letter.
task achievement
The letter includes comprehensive information about the best time to visit, interesting places, and accommodations, fulfilling the task requirements well.
coherence and cohesion
Each idea is well-developed and supported with specific details, making the content rich and informative.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,