In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Due to the advancement of recent technology in
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of the world's connection,
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have much more chances to study overseas universities compared to the
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three decades. Studying
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is considered
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an
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experience for
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, who want to expand their knowledge. In
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essay, I will deliberate the pros and cons of an overseas study, and provide my perspective according to my experiences. The
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in
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studying in an international university
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to improve
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language
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skills. Not only
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, which is the main
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taught in all lessons, you
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learn
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native
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of the particular country that you visit for daily communication.
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, when I was
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exchange student in Indonesia, I had to learn every
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, and my friend
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taught me how to speak in Bahasa
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for ordering food
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and counting numbers.
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,
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degree
seem
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to be a better degree compared to
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national degree, which contributes to a better opportunity to find high paid jobs in the future, because graduating from international universities
garuntees
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guarantees
that you are
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in
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.
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, studying
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can lead
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to depression due to the unfamiliar environment including weird foods, culture, tradition, unusual weather, and so on.
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, my weight was reduced from 90 kg to 80 kg because I did not like
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foods, as it is
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the diet
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of Muslim with no pork.
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, homesick is one of the causes of stress, which may happen in foreign
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as they are far away from their
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, friends, and parents. From my experience, during the
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week living in Indonesia, I cried
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as I miss my parents and friends.
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, studying in
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university can be attributed to
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the unpleasant
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feeling
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feelings
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among
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. In conclusion,
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studying
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can cause some depressed emotion owing to living in
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unusual atmosphere and being far from home, the benefits of it outnumbered the aforementioned drawbacks because it is the best opportunity to enhance
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skill
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, and to work in
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prestigious companies in the future.
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