One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: •describe why you want to work in that country; •tell him/her about your skills and experience; •ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)
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Hello, my dear Tomas. I hope
this
letter finds you well.
As you know, I graduated from high school two weeks ago. I have made a very important decision - I'm interested in taking a break for the next year before university. Moreover
, I want to spend this
year in the US, near you.
First of all, I have a lot of experience in a variety of works. I worked as a babysitter for the last
2 years, and as a waiter during my summer vacation, furthermore
, I have helped my father in his auto repair shop. However
, I'll be glad to have any family with a big house, where I can live and work as a babysitter or gardener.
If you have any possibility to help me with it, I'll be the happiest dude in this
world. And we'll have an opportunity to see each other on weekends.
Looking forward to hearing from you, if you have any details like wage or conditions before they will connect you, it will be fine.
Thanks in advance.
Tim.Submitted by anastasia on
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, ensure that ideas flow smoothly between sentences and paragraphs. Consider using transitional phrases to link ideas together more effectively.
task achievement
Make sure all aspects of the prompt are addressed fully. You could provide a bit more detail about the specific questions related to work conditions and wages.
task achievement
Your writing tone is very friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend, which makes your letter warm and engaging.
coherence cohesion
You included a clear introduction, main body, and conclusion, which helps in maintaining a logical structure in your letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,