Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To wah extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Entire the
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human history,
music
have
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has had
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a significant role in their life
such
as in
the
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apply
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religious
ceremony
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or even
for
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pray
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. So some
people
believe that
music
can
come
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bring
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people
together with
different cultures and ages. I partially agree with them because there
is
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some songs or even instruments that belong to a special group of folk and it is not interesting for others. on the one hand, there are several nostalgic pieces of
music
or national
music
that all a country’s
citizen
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citizens
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or who speak in a specific language in different
generation
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generations
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listen to
those
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apply
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. if anywhere play the song,
all
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the
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population dance
with
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to
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it regardless of their age and
enjoy
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enjoys
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the song.
On the contrary
, there are some
music
genres that belong to special ages.
for instance
, rock and roll, pop or
k-pop
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K-pop
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is interesting solely for teenagers or youth
while
the elderly like to listen to some traditional and classic
music
.
On the other hand
,
now a day
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nowadays
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some English songs or Latin
music
are very popular among all nations and dance with those at their parties.
also
for a number of singer concerts
such
as Celine Dion and Jenifer
Lopes
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there are
people
with various cultural backgrounds and without
languages
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barriers that just dance together because of the
music
. But there is some
music
which is for a special part of the world and culture and other
nation
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nations
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can not even listen to it.
for example
, the Australian ethnic has religious
music
which plays
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that is played
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with a special instrument and other
nation
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nations
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even cannot listen to that because
don't
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it doesn't
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have a pleasant sound.
To conclude
,
although
there are some genres that are for just a culture or a generation, I think
music
can help
people
of different nationalities or different generations
can
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connect to each other and have a good time despite all differences.
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