Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect individuals and society? What can be done about this?

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days, the average lifespan of

people

after retirement has significantly increased which leads to problems

such

as

loneliness

and mental illnesses. In order to solve these issues, different actions should be taken

such

as pet shelters raising awareness through the help of advertisement. When

people

reach the age of retirement, they usually decide that they need to be

home

and rest since they have become older. Even though

this

seems like a relaxing thing to do, human nature always requires us to be busy. Staying

home

for too long after our body got used to working,

therefore

, can bring about the feeling of boredom and

loneliness

.

For instance

, when elderlies are at

home

all day, they often do not have someone to talk to, because other family members might be at work or at school.

This

can potentially lead to depression and other types of mental illnesses.

Moreover

, if older

people

are constantly at

home

without moving much, it will result in physical diseases as well. These problems could be overcome by several suggestions. One solution is that local animal

shelter

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ought to start advertising themselves

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. Once

people

get a pet, it is much easier to beat

loneliness

since animals need to be cared for like babies. If an old person is healthy enough, they can spend their time

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feeding their pet and playing with them. Another suggestion is that the government or even citizens themselves might make online events, especially for weaker elderlies. Currently, most

people

are capable of using devices needed for online communication. So connecting those who have retired through apps

such

as Microsoft Teams or Zoom would definitely help in overcoming

loneliness

. In conclusion, after retirement,

people

can face numerous issues that might result in the mental and physical well-being of a person. If we want to prevent these consequences, adopting homeless pets or encouraging online meetings should be considered

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valid solutions.