In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Nowadays in Britain, when
people
get aged, they Use synonyms
are often send
to old aged homes where they spent Change the verb form
are often sent
their
rest of their life. Change the pronoun
the
However
, some might argue that the Linking Words
government
should take Use synonyms
care
of their expenses whereas, in my Use synonyms
argument
I prefer that their family members need to take Add a comma
,argument
care
of the costs.
Some might say thatUse synonyms
,
Remove the comma
apply
Use synonyms
government
is responsible to take up Add an article
the government
cost
. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
This
is because, old Linking Words
people
who Use synonyms
does
not have a family and, who leaves alone needs to be considered in Change the verb form
do
this
situation. Linking Words
For instance
,An old person who is orphaned will not have any stable income to support his own costs. Linking Words
Moreover
, these citizens have paid their Linking Words
neccessary
taxes to the Correct your spelling
necessary
government
Use synonyms
for
during their prime time. So, Change preposition
apply
inshort
its logical that the Correct your spelling
in short
government
should take Use synonyms
care
their fellow citizens.
Use synonyms
Although
, it is necessary for old Linking Words
people
who have their own family, needs to take Use synonyms
care
of their fellow Use synonyms
member
. Because, these old Fix the agreement mistake
members
people
Use synonyms
where
their guardians when they were young; they had been fed and taken Correct your spelling
were
care
of by the Use synonyms
parents
Use synonyms
untill
, the children reaches adulthood. Correct your spelling
until
For example
, Linking Words
Parents
have been letting their child Use synonyms
to
live in their Change the verb form
apply
house
for Fix the agreement mistake
houses
rent free
. Add a hyphen
rent-free
Eventhough
, Correct your spelling
Even though
its
the adult's Correct your spelling
it's
responsiblty
to achieve a stable income, but it was their Correct your spelling
responsibility
parents
who supported them Use synonyms
untill
they reach the level of maturity. Correct your spelling
until
Therefore
, it is clear that the family should take the sole responsibility to take Linking Words
care
of their elders.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
goverment
should take Correct your spelling
government
responsibilty
to take Correct your spelling
responsibility
care
of the elder's who are unable to Use synonyms
care
for themselves. Use synonyms
However
, in my Linking Words
opinion
family members should keep in mind that, they will Add the comma(s)
,opinion
also
be old in the future and their children might Linking Words
also
repeat the same for them. Evidently, many children consider their Linking Words
parents
to be their role model and role model should never be a villain.Use synonyms
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