In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays in Britain, when

people

get aged, they

are often send

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to old aged homes where they spent

their

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rest of their life.

However

, some might argue that the

government

should take

care

of their expenses whereas, in my

argument

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I prefer that their family members need to take

care

of the costs. Some might say that

,

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government

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the government

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is responsible to take up

cost

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.

This

is because, old

people

who

does

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not have a family and, who leaves alone needs to be considered in

this

situation.

For instance

,An old person who is orphaned will not have any stable income to support his own costs.

Moreover

, these citizens have paid their

neccessary

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necessary

taxes to the

government

for

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during their prime time. So,

inshort

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in short

its logical that the

government

should take

care

their fellow citizens.

Although

, it is necessary for old

people

who have their own family, needs to take

care

of their fellow

member

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members

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. Because, these old

people

where

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their guardians when they were young; they had been fed and taken

care

of by the

parents

untill

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until

, the children reaches adulthood.

For example

,

Parents

have been letting their child

to

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live in their

house

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for

rent free

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.

Eventhough

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Even though

,

its

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the adult's

responsiblty

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responsibility

to achieve a stable income, but it was their

parents

who supported them

untill

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until

they reach the level of maturity.

Therefore

, it is clear that the family should take the sole responsibility to take

care

of their elders. In conclusion, the

goverment

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government

should take

responsibilty

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responsibility

to take

care

of the elder's who are unable to

care

for themselves.

However

, in my

opinion

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family members should keep in mind that, they will

also

be old in the future and their children might

also

repeat the same for them. Evidently, many children consider their

parents

to be their role model and role model should never be a villain.