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some people think that studying history is a waste of time , whereas other think it is essential to learn history .discuss both sides and your opinion.

#people #history #waste #time
tahOne school of thought believe that learning past events
is
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 a wastage of time
however
 another school of thought opine it is crucial .
This
 essay intends to delve into the reasons behind both the perspective along with my opinion. To commence with the former view, with the passage of time
alot
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a lot
 of changes are occurs in our surrounding many new technologies have been introduced as regards nowadays learning
history
 somewhere lost its importance because of the advancement and with the evaluation of internet with the single click,
one
 can come to know about the
cultureand
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culture and
 tradition.
Moreover
, it is
impragmatic
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pragmatic
 to learn the exact dates of fights or exact facts and figures
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today's youngsters came to know about the Ramayan and the Mahabharat's whole stories by the evolution of interest.
Inspite
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In spite
 of
this
, learning
history
 somewhere creates a burden on students as it is difficult for them to memorize each and every incident that
occured
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occurred
 in the past years.
On the other hand
, few individuals that
history
 plays a crucial role in
one
's life as all know from
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 beginning of our academic
carrer
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career
history
 is
one
 of the
subject
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 that deals with all the past events that
occure
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occur
occurred
occurs
 in
last
 50 decades
moreover
 from
history
 .people came to know about the contribution of the freedom
frighters
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fighters
freighters
 in the fight for independence .
Subsequently
, from
history
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 we came to know about past centuries
that is
 from the period of
manuscript
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the manuscript
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 to the period of printing document each and every detail of the country should be embedded in
history
for example
 evolution of human being is
one
 of the major
concept
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 of the
history
 from past centuries
however
 many
archeologist
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 came to know about the undiscovered site from the
history
 because
history
 is the
one
 where some of the
referrences
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references
 were made . Before putting the pen down ,according to my opinion learning
history
 is important as it
help
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 people to keep
incontact
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in contact
 with the past and ancestors too.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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