In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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It is argued that in some well-secured countries, the citizens there still have the feeling of not being
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and social media are two of the biggest reason behind that situation.
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essay is aimed at analysing the reasons in detail before recommending some solutions for
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aspect about which I want to talk is
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. In some developed nations, we can see the
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, which results in a lot of serious social problems. They are
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burden that society
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to put up with. Taking Japan as an example, despite being one of the greatest economies in the world,
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country has to suffer from an alarming proportion of unemployed residents. They just stay in their houses, do nothing and live on money from the government. Another contributor is the Internet. There is plenty of news with the content of violence and drugs that
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to an invisible fear of those crimes while the truth is completely a different story.
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, in Viet Nam, people rarely go out alone at night, but in fact, it is safe for them to do so. In order to solve
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menace, the
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thing that the government can do is to provide employment opportunities for its citizens.
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should be provided with
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, which can really help with alleviating poverty.
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, startups in Sweden are supported with a loan with
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in one year, and Sweden is
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one of the most worth-living places
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all over the world. In conclusion,
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people fear for their safety, the issue can be solved through the government tackling
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issues and restructuring its armed forces.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • availability heuristic
  • media coverage
  • misinformation
  • urbanization
  • community cohesion
  • justice system
  • economic inequality
  • community policing
  • media literacy
  • surveillance
  • swift justice
  • social cohesion
  • neighborhood watch
  • deterrent
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