The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of
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consumption of various nutrients like
sodium
,saturated fat and added
sugar
in meals and snacks in
USA
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.In general,
sodium
has the highest intake followed by added
sugar
.All the minerals are consumed in
lowest
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percentage during
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breakfast
. The consumption of
sodium
accounts for approximately 43% of the total intake being the highest of all which being followed by added
sugar
accounting for close to 42%.
Sodium
and added
sugar
are absorbed
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the highest rate during dinner and snacks respectively ,
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the same is consumed
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the lowest rate accounting for around 14% and 16% during
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breakfast
.
Sodium
has
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equal
percent
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of consumption during
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snacks and
breakfast
accounting
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around 14%. It is
infered
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inferred
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that almost all the minerals have
lowest
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intake during
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breakfast
ranging from 14
percentage
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to 16
percentage
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.Added
sugar
and saturated fat
is
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consumed in
the
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equal proportion during
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breakfast
hours.
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