It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, itvis sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Talents are inborn some people believe so ,
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training can lead to one becoming an expert in that particular field .In
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I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
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but it requires naturing,an artist who has the vocals yet does not put in work and effort eventually
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are bound to not perform very well in their field it is paramount to practice and keep learning all the time.
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talent cannot be taught sharpening skills is key to perfecting anything.
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and women with all their speed if not practised
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it's better than nothing
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talent requires naturing,training to achieve what one is required once appreciated the sky can only be the limit.
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