Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?
It is believed, that the number of citizens with an unhealthy
food
pyramid and less physical activity becomes more and more. This
essay will discuss reasons of stick to the diet, which contain lots of saturated fats due to sedimentary lifestyle
and possible solutions of
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this
problem such
as changing eating habits or restrict unhealthy fast food
stores.
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, people
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causes
the
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obesity
problems. People
become lazier by reason of computers provides high range opportunities for them. As a
result
it causes less physical exercises and citizens pay less attention to control their eating habits. Add a comma
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Consequently
, men face obesity
and other health illness. For instance
, about 57% of American office workers have passive
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obesity
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One of the possible solutions is encouraging Fix the agreement mistake
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people
to pay attention to their food
pyramid and reduce number
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fast-food
food
establishments. Active advertising of a healthy way of life contributes to a change in people
's opinion about their way of living. Moreover
, this
method has wave
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stores and it has positive
effect on Add an article
a positive
this
problem. If people
saw little junk food
establishments, then
they will feed more vitamins, proteins. For example
, due to active advertising in England, they overcame the problem of sedimentary lifestyle
and prevent obesity
.
To sum up, in last
decade index of people
, who have bad eating habits due to sedimentary lifestyle
. To solve this
issue, citizens should carefully change their food
pyramid.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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