Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Subjects that can be studied in schools are increasing. Some people are suggesting that teaching
of
international news for secondary students is not important on their school timings. Change preposition
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This
essay will discuss both sides agreement in detail and provide evidence as to why that subject is not needed for the learners.
To begin
with, some people are allowing that it is needed since many updated courses are now implemented as early as high
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the high
next
level of education when they are pursuing to study in universities or colleges. In addition
, they believe that it will help them to prepare in choosing their courses. For example
, the news all over the world is vital to the public which awareness is presenting what is happening around us. If at early
stage we are obliged to study and learned international news as early we know what is happening in the world.
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Furthermore
, others are having the perception that additional subject to learn is not needed and instead
they can focus on what they really want. In our generation nowadays reports can be seen everywhere especially in
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the use
grade schoolers
. In relation to that, they can use the extra time to develop and research Add a hyphen
grade-schoolers
on
the subjects that they are having difficulties with.
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in schools that can be essencial
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they will have the wilingness
to learn more. Correct your spelling
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