Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together Do you agree or disagree.?
It is a common belief that
music
can bring people
from different cultures and ages together. I also
believe music
is a good way
of bonding people
from the
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environment
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environments
music
is a tool to deliver feelings and it's a good way
of making friends
who like the same kind of music
.
To begin
with, music
has been a tool to deliver feelings and messages for over centuries. Because it's not like books or dictionaries, music
is composed by a harmony of various instruments and beautiful voices of the singer. Therefore
, it doesn't need any knowledge to enjoy music
, so people
from different cultures and ages can amuse with the same music
through its languages are different. For example
, K-pop singer BTS become worldwide by awarding 1st on the Billboard music
chart. Although
their songs are consist of Koreans, through
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American's
minds. They cannot understand BTS's message so they find on the Internet to find out and the new melody from Korea hit American's ears and hearts.
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Americans'
In addition
, it's easier to make friends
through music
. When people
make friends
, the first
thing to do is find a common interest. If they find something same in interest, they'll open their mind to each other. By the way
, music
is a common hobby to people
around the world and music
has many kinds of genres. If they have an interest in the same genre, it becomes easier to get close with. For example
, many kinds of music
festivals are held around the world, and we can see people
who like the same genres together, they readily become friends
due to like the same kind of music
.
To sum up, I agree that music
is the best way
of bonding people
from different circumstances together due to music
's characteristics of sending their feelings through melody and it's the easiest way
of making friends
because listening to music
is everyone's common hobby.Submitted by alice1809 on
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