Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together Do you agree or disagree.?

It is a common belief that
music
can bring
people
from different cultures and ages together. I
also
believe
music
is a good
way
of bonding
people
from
the
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different
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because
music
is a tool to deliver feelings and it's a good
way
of making
friends
who like the same kind of
music
.
To begin
with,
music
has been a tool to deliver feelings and messages for over centuries. Because it's not like books or dictionaries,
music
is composed by a harmony of various instruments and beautiful voices of the singer.
Therefore
, it doesn't need any knowledge to enjoy
music
, so
people
from different cultures and ages can amuse with the same
music
through its languages are different.
For example
, K-pop singer BTS become worldwide by awarding 1st on the Billboard
music
chart.
Although
their songs are consist of Koreans,
through
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their message and rhythm,
it
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moved
American's
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minds. They cannot understand BTS's message so they find on the Internet to find out and the new melody from Korea hit American's ears and hearts.
In addition
, it's easier to make
friends
through
music
. When
people
make
friends
, the
first
thing to do is find a common interest. If they find something same in interest, they'll open their mind to each other. By the
way
,
music
is a common hobby to
people
around the world and
music
has many kinds of genres. If they have an interest in the same genre, it becomes easier to get close with.
For example
, many kinds of
music
festivals are held around the world, and we can see
people
who like the same genres together, they readily become
friends
due to like the same kind of
music
. To sum up, I agree that
music
is the best
way
of bonding
people
from different circumstances together due to
music
's characteristics of sending their feelings through melody and it's the easiest
way
of making
friends
because listening to
music
is everyone's common hobby.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
  • catalyst
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