Planting tree is very important. Some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town, while others says that housing facilities should be built instead.

In recent years, the issue related to reforestation has attracted the public’s attention. Some investors suggest that residential construction should be more concerned thanks to human overpopulation, even though the remote areas of metropolises can be used for replanting projects. I partly agree with
this
statement owing to several reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, the principal aspect of
this
issue is that forests are the main source of oxygen productions. Regarding global warming and climate change, the proportion of carbon dioxide emissions has been significantly increased, destroying the atmosphere.
As a result
, the unoccupied fields of cities should be utilized to mitigate atmospheric warming by implementing the re-afforestation approach.
Secondly
, another crucial point is that greenwoods can help prevent
flood
Fix the agreement mistake
floods
show examples
and drought. Eden Project in Madagascar,
for instance
, has successfully planted over 407 million mangrove and dry deciduous trees to solve water shortage in the area, contributing benefits to local agriculture and people using water as a primary supply.
Conversely
,
although
the above viewpoints have validity on the surface, it cannot be denied that there is an overlooked aspect. It is
commonly
Replace the word
common
show examples
to understand that
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
forestation regeneration and house building can be jointly developed.
Thus
, these phenomena obviously are mutually beneficial
relationship
Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
show examples
, promoting a seamless blend of nature with urban living.
For example
, Singapore
already
Add a missing verb
has already
show examples
turned these ideas
to
Change preposition
into
show examples
reality by running an incentive program to encourage building companies and property owners to install rooftop gardens and vertical plant walls, becoming one of the greenest cities in the world since 2013. To conclude, I am inclined to believe that these two developments can be run together. They will help to enrich the rea with long-term prevention from natural disasters and support the problem of overpopulation these days.
Therefore
, the government and
public
Correct article usage
the public
show examples
should coordinate sustainable measures to perform these tasks.
Submitted by burist.ch on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: