A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply
Dear Dave,
I hope you are doing well and my letter finds you in good health.I got your email for advice on engineering course which I did
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