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Band 7.5

You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the software developer
position
that is
 currently listed on your company's website. In terms of qualifications, I have completed a bachelor's degree in computer engineering and the requirements listed for
this
position
 clearly match my qualifications.
Additionally
, I have
also
 worked on many projects and those skills and knowledge can be beneficial to your company.
Furthermore
, I was
also
 a team lead in my internship which taught me team management skills and I am very much motivated and excited to work as a software developer. I have been trying to enter my field and I want to expand my knowledge and experience to learn and adapt to new things in my field. Previously, I used to work as a cashier for 2 years and in 2019 I got selected as a web developer for my internship. The skills and knowledge I gained there can be very useful for
this
position
. I can be a good candidate for
this
position
. I have attached a CV with more details about myself. Yours sincerely, Tirth Thakkar
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Consider adding specific examples of projects or achievements that directly relate to the job you're applying for to strengthen your application.
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While your enthusiasm is clear, articulating your understanding of the company's mission and values and explicitly connecting your skills and experiences to their needs can enhance your application.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next by using connectors or introductory phrases that guide the reader through your narrative.
coherence cohesion
For an even stronger connection with the reader, consider tailoring the greeting to the specific hiring manager, if known, instead of a generic salutation.
coherence cohesion
You've shown a solid understanding of paragraph structure, with each paragraph dedicated to a distinct point.
coherence cohesion
Your closing statement is polite and professional, effectively concluding your letter.
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You successfully communicated your enthusiasm for the position and relevant experiences which make you a suitable candidate.
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The overall tone of your letter is appropriately formal and matches the context of a job application.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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