A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

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Hello Dave, I hope you’re doing well and my letter finds you in a good health.I recently got your email as you were asking for my advice regarding
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engineering course which you are planning to
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in the same college from where I did my graduation .Basically,
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a
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programme with two semesters each year and
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6 months training course organised by
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university
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in some
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. Let me explain
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university
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excellent infrastructure and
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labs.
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, teachers are
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very helpful and supportive.So, you won’t be having much difficulty in learning at a new place.
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university
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providing training in artificial intelligence and it would be beneficial for you in long term.
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,you need to download their application form from the
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official website and fill
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desired information required .
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copy of your degree attested by
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and
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you mail me your documents
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my address .
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personally submit
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the admissions department. Hope
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hear from your side soon. Best wishes,
Jagjot
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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