Difference between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?
In today's world, there are a lot of similarities between various
country
's fashions,adverstising
,brands,eating habits and television channels.
Earlier, each Correct your spelling
advertising
country
's uniquness
in every sector was very clear and evident. Correct your spelling
uniqueness
For instance
, l visited a nearby park last
month with my friends. There I noticed a couple taking selfies of them by wearing matching
dress which follows a foreign Add an article
a matching
culture
. Because,
according to my Remove the comma
apply
country
's tradition women will either wear a saree or a salwar always even if they are at their home. That culture
was followed in the past mainly because it was accepted by the
society. But in Correct article usage
apply
21st
century, people are least bothered about other people's Correct article usage
the 21st
opinion
. Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
This
drastic change in the field of fashion is also
there in other sectors like brands,eating habits as well as TV channels.
Earlier,television channels in a particular country
will ultimately be focused on the country
's political news, series or movies of that specific country
and also
all the festivals,rituals within the states. But nowadays, all those are set apart to a specific categories
like "Hindi music","Telugu movie" and so on. The overall importance is completely given to global affairs,international web series,global news,celebrations Correct the article-noun agreement
specific categories
a specific category
such
as christmas
which is Change the capitalization
Christmas
prominant
Correct your spelling
prominent
world wide
. So the major disadvantage of all these changes mentioned are people forgetting their own cultures, own Correct your spelling
worldwide
country
's brands, traditional culture
,local news and many other stuffs
.
In conclusion, even though there are many advantages Change the wording
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
such
as knowledge on global affairs, outsourcings, learning foreign language and culture
, every single individual are
getting attracted towards the developed countries than their own Change the verb form
is
country
. After some point of
time, everyone is deciding to restart their lives again from another Change preposition
in
country
which is a major disadvantage and the impact is purely
because of the influences of foreign Replace the adverb
pure
culture
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