Difference between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?

In today's world, there are a lot of similarities between various
country
's fashions,
adverstising
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advertising
,brands,eating habits and television channels. Earlier, each
country
's
uniquness
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uniqueness
in every sector was very clear and evident.
For instance
, l visited a nearby park
last
month with my friends. There I noticed a couple taking selfies of them by wearing
matching
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dress which follows a foreign
culture
. Because
,
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according to my
country
's tradition women will either wear a saree or a salwar always even if they are at their home. That
culture
was followed in the past mainly because it was accepted by
the
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society. But in
21st
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century, people are least bothered about other people's
opinion
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opinions
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.
This
drastic change in the field of fashion is
also
there in other sectors like brands,eating habits as well as TV channels. Earlier,television channels in a particular
country
will ultimately be focused on the
country
's political news, series or movies of that specific
country
and
also
all the festivals,rituals within the states. But nowadays, all those are set apart to
a specific categories
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like "Hindi music","Telugu movie" and so on. The overall importance is completely given to global affairs,international web series,global news,celebrations
such
as
christmas
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which is
prominant
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prominent
world wide
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. So the major disadvantage of all these changes mentioned are people forgetting their own cultures, own
country
's brands, traditional
culture
,local news and many other
stuffs
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. In conclusion, even though there are many advantages
such
as knowledge on global affairs, outsourcings, learning foreign language and
culture
, every single individual
are
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getting attracted towards the developed countries than their own
country
. After some point
of
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time, everyone is deciding to restart their lives again from another
country
which is a major disadvantage and the impact is
purely
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because of the influences of foreign
culture
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

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  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Economic development
  • Cultural exchange
  • Consumer choice
  • Homogenization
  • Cultural diversity
  • Monoculture
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Economic disparities
  • Environmental impact
  • Resource depletion
  • Industrialized consumption patterns
  • Fast fashion
  • Fast food
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