Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many believe

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era made the act of purchasing goods and services a lot less complicated while others believe the opposite. A majority of the population suggested how efficient shopping can be by utilising the right inventions,

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although

the rest find

technology

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be overcomplicate

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the simple act of buying items. I have to agree with the

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statement as I have experienced the simplicity

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using

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while shopping.

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essay will discuss both views and my opinion apprehensively.

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with, many members of society agree that modern technical operations aid in the exchange of goods and services.

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, with the availability of

internet

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the internet

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customers and sellers from different parts of the

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can connect through the same platform.

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means that obtaining any products from anywhere in the world has become possible, without having an individual

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physically travel the distance.

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, at the moment, I am able to buy Korean cosmetics from Korea to be delivered to Australia in just

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one click

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.

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to that, there are even smarter advancements that allow automated purchases and payments.

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, saving many traders a lot of time and resources.

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, some people view the recent innovations,

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as online shopping, to be troublesome rather than helpful. The opinion emerges after a number of the public have difficulties while browsing or selecting items online simply because it is confusing.

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most of the time, specifications

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as sizes in clothing or quantity units in others are unclear. Apart from that, they are unable to feel the material of clothing or read labels on food packaging.

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, issues arise when the purchased objects arrive and they are not what the buyers expected or chosen. As an illustration, I have unintentionally purchased 12 dozens of eggs,

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of a dozen, when using an online service of my local supermarket. In conclusion, the debate on whether recent

technology

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have

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made buying things simpler or not will remain.

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it is cost and time saving, especially for buyers and sellers all over the world, there are people who encounter issues while using certain

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.

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, my opinion

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towards agreeing that

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has made shopping less complicated.