in the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern society thanks to the advancement in technology. There are more and more methods to produce
food
or other products without using Use synonyms
animals
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animals
. In my opinion, I believe that there is no need of using Use synonyms
animals
for Use synonyms
food
or manufacture products.
The Use synonyms
first
argument given to support my opinion is that there is a great evolution of many aspects of society. People are gradually aware of the benefits of eating Linking Words
vegetables
. We should follow some nutrition experts’ advice that eats more Use synonyms
vegetables
and reduces meats that provide more nutritious Use synonyms
such
as vitamin, even protein which is aware that contain a lot in meat for our health. Linking Words
Furthermore
, most of us want to have good looking with a slim body that the reason why people like to eat Linking Words
vegetables
and fruits than meat. Many fresh ingredients from plants are played an essential role in a healthy diet for everyone.
In manufacturing, advanced technology allows us to produce many goods Use synonyms
such
as clothes, shoes, medicines and so on without using Linking Words
materials
from Use synonyms
animals
. We can Use synonyms
use
natural Use synonyms
materials
like wool or man-made Use synonyms
materials
like cotton, silicon and so on. Another reason for using other Use synonyms
materials
which are alternatives for Use synonyms
animals
that to protect the Use synonyms
animals
' safety. Use synonyms
Although
the government has imposed a tricky ban on wild Linking Words
animals
hunting, whereas the number of Use synonyms
animals
which is hunted improperly is increasing day by day because of people demands on eating and Use synonyms
use
for medication. Whilst they can Use synonyms
use
medicine from plants
In conclusion, I entirely agree that there is no need of using Use synonyms
animals
for Use synonyms
food
or other products. We completely can Use synonyms
use
other things like Use synonyms
vegetables
or many other Use synonyms
materials
to alter Use synonyms
animals
in the manufacture and consume Use synonyms
food
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite