Some say that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
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drama
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music
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essay agrees with the statement as it will enhance the intellectual capability of Linking Words
children
and help to increase their creativity.
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To begin
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subjects
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music
, arts and Use synonyms
drama
help to boost the intellectual development of Use synonyms
children
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is to say that it provides them with a platform where they can develop their different Linking Words
skills
which are highly vital in their lifelike, sensory and motor Use synonyms
skills
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children
the flexibility to learn various Use synonyms
skills
without making them bored. Use synonyms
For example
, it is seen in many schools in Japan that playing the piano and other musical instruments helped Linking Words
children
to develop new motor Use synonyms
skills
every day and they don’t get bored by it.
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Likewise
, arts, Linking Words
drama
, and Use synonyms
music
help Use synonyms
students
to express their creative side which increases their socialization capability. Getting involved in arts and Use synonyms
drama
classes from the primary level allow Use synonyms
children
to have depth knowledge of their countries’ history. It has Use synonyms
also
been shown that Linking Words
students
who are involved in these Use synonyms
subjects
can Use synonyms
also
do better in other Linking Words
subjects
like maths and science and have better communication Use synonyms
skills
compare to other Use synonyms
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For instance
, it has been seen that student who attends Linking Words
drama
and art classes are more sensible and have a better understanding of their surroundings.
In conclusion, it has been said by some people that Use synonyms
drama
, art, and Use synonyms
music
play a vital role in the primary level as other school Use synonyms
subjects
because it helps Use synonyms
students
to enhance their intellectual development and boost their creativity.Use synonyms
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