In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays, curiosity about the basic needs of life, what we eat, what we dress and where we live has become one of the factors before choosing things, especially living space.

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have anxiety about the past for

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, natural disaster effects and unfortunate signs. The following paragraphs will present these reasons and the way how do

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find out their concerns before a conclusion is reached. It is noticeable that

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are more concerned about their accommodation, not only design features

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of the habitat. There are many reasons why they are interested in it.

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priority for residents. Before they decide to buy, they need to make sure that there is no

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history

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or the

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rates have to be at the lowest level as much as possible. Similarity to the natural disaster possibility in the area,

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related to their asset

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as well as

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as frequency of storms, floods and wildfires.

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, the death rate record is

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the crucial thing for

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who are concerned about fortune signs.

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, whoever lives in

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house, one of the family members will pass away for any reason.

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can affect to family’s mental health and their mind

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, there are various ways of discovery, depending on accumulated experience and connections. In case of finding the

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rate

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, they can coordinate with the household’s authorities to track the

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and gather it as one of the information for the decision.

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, natural disasters can be found out from the news which can be easily searched on the internet.

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, the best way to investigate the unfortunate sign is

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information might be right or wrong

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. In order to prove

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, it is important that

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need to research more information from many sources. In conclusion,

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will choose the best choice for their life as much as they can in order to live their life more efficiently and comfortably. There is no particular right or wrong for those actions

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because everything happens with some reason

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to concern about the past, present and

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their future plan as well.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Historical research
Genealogy
Architectural styles
Heritage
Relics
Oral history
Archival records
Museum exhibits
Historical societies
House tours
Renovation projects
Original blueprints
Careful documentation

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