A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

It is widely believed that the

appearances

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of crime scenes in the movie industry

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greatly contributed to spoiling the actions of the youths, which results in increasing

violience

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violence

.

Therefore

, in my opinion, there should be restrictions on those kinds of films prior to launch and the warning policy for criminals. The main reason why mass

media

and television continue to have an effect on young people is that many teens may be completely addicted to violent TV shows or the

film

industry. They want to be the characters in the

film

, copy every single

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of them, and the disaster is created. Taking John Wick as an example, the

film

is full of killing, stealing,

robbering

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robbing

robbery

for a nonsense purpose, in an unlawful society. After watching

this

film

, the

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may think that they have the right to do the same things without thinking about the consequences.

Nevertheless

, the restriction to producing an unlawful

film

and early warning to the youngsters can support

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crime reduction. All the movies ought to be monitored before finalizing, uploading or launching on any platform.

Furthermore

, there must be a fine or a ban on relevant

media

producer

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in case of misconduct.

Moreover

, the authorities must warn the public through electronic

media

not to involve in any sort of illegal activity

likewise

, thief, stealing any stuff and disclose severe

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possible punishment

such

as thief, stealing any stuff.

Hence

, the controlling of different publishing movies, and the relevant policy for punishment for the youth might reduce the scandal rate. In conclusion,

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electronic

media

have a great impact on

young

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generation. While I strongly recommend that the check and balance of any

media

before telecasting and early caution might reduce the violence.