Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and write your own opinion.

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have lots of standpoints whether the modern world makes us dependent on each other or it makes us more independent. While other
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said
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dependency has increased
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by
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, I believe that
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are more monotonous and stronger these
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. On the one hand, some
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advocate that we are more dependent on each other because of modern technologies. Nowadays, the use of technologies has become convenient as it always provides the right solution and answers. So,
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become more dependent on them.
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, if
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have
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and difficulties, they start to find them on Google
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. They do not try to solve the
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by themselves and depend on the internet.
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, due to the hectic and busy lives that most families lead, they are always dependent on each other to support them from head to toes even if they have minor
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.
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, the parents want to have a great family lifestyle and they have to work harder to fulfil
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achievement.
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, they need support from their grandparents for their children's care in order to concentrate on their work.
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, technologies have developed
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by
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,
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are more well-informed and open-minded thinking independently than in the past
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. To illustrate, in the past
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, the students need parents' help to fill the forms and other necessary things for enrolment for their schools. In
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modern world, students can find those things on the internet and can do it well themself without help from their parents.
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, in the past,
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usually get married around their twenty and even earlier. These
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,
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are likely to have an independent life and want to enjoy more single space before getting married. To summarize, it is true that we do depend on others sometimes,
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, we always solve our
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and are more independent in
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modern world and experience a more thriving life which makes them more confident in their personality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interdependence
  • globalization
  • technological advancements
  • collective action
  • digital evolution
  • minimal reliance
  • direct interaction
  • empowered
  • access to technology
  • societal expectations
  • personal choice
  • leverage
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