Some people think that one world government is better than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The state is the best institute in terms of administration. Some people think it is better to have only one government to administer, whereas I think it would have negative outweighs positive. In
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To begin
with, the most important reason is that there are individual characteristics of each country whether demographic, geographic, cultural or even religious, Linking Words
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, it is likely hard to launch an acceptable campaign or sustainable policy which is needed to enforce the population of every country. Linking Words
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, it is clearly seen that many countries have domestic arguments at present which lead to violence due to some new policy which is launched by their state. Linking Words
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, it would bring an international chaotic issue to the world because each country has their own outstanding characteristics.
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, another reason is that the unique valuable culture might vanish or be mixed and become the one. The attractive place where people would like to discover will disappear and the world will be becoming too uninterested anymore. Linking Words
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, according to the recent news, it has been revealed that in Hong Kong which is regulated by the U.S.A , new generations tend to not give value to their own culture and begin to fade out ultimately. Linking Words
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is a negative thing that might happen if the population world is administered by one state.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are negatives outweighing positives if all countries are organised under a government whether in terms of violent issues or disappeared treasured cultures which would happen because of the diversity.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...