Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs – need to feel challenged and also wanted more benefits describe your new job – whole new experience / I have never worked on it before / love it tell him/her your other news – next month I’ll travel to Europe
Hello John,
I hope you are doing well, it has been a
while
since we last
caught up, and I thought it was about time we connected again.
A lot of things have been changed lastly
and I am really not sure where I can start. I changed my job, and I do not work in BusyBox anymore. The main reason why I left was the lack of new challenges, and to be honest I believe I deserve more benefits.
Now I am working in Google and it is pretty awesome, I am really happy, and every day is a big adventure. My team is great, and the office is full of motivated and talented people, I have to learn a lot now, but I am highly motivated.
Additionally
I going to Europe next month, I have a plan to spend around 4 weeks there. I am going to visit Spain, France, and Switzerland. I am sure it will be a great adventure. Do you have any plans for travel? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
GeorgeSubmitted by dariusz.slusar on
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The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
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The friendly and conversational tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend.