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Write about the following topic: The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. There are a lot of reasons for
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, there are still people who are living a hundred years.
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 proves that the argument is not entirely true. The below-average count of adults health rate can be the effect of pollution. And
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 stands at the pinnacle. Because, a few decades back, the amount pollution was nearly at the nadir. But today, there are very few places which can be considered as pollution-free and 99% of them are villages. The count of vehicles gradually increased and it's still going up. The air released from all these vehicles contaminates the atmosphere. And that's the same gas we will be breathing every day. There are ample cases registering daily regarding lung diseases and the sole reason for
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pollution. And there can be a number of other valid points where the health of a person can be probably at a lower level.
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, the eating habits of a person can affect him/her on a whole different level. The challenges faced by having
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 food can be unpredictable. In the olden days, there aren't any preservatives added to the eatables. But now, all the packaged dishes have multiple varieties of chemicals added just to make them more colourful and tasty. A human being's lifespan will definitely rely on his well-being condition and one should be aware of the changing world and must take the necessary precaution to live a peaceful life.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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