Modern technology has made it possible for people to view exhibitions at home, so museums and art galleries will disappear soon. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it has become commonplace for artists to showcase their work online, enabling viewers to see their work from the comfort of their homes.

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has especially become popular after the recent pandemic and stay-at-home orders. Some say

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will eventually lead to the demise of museums and art galleries. In my opinion, I do not think

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is the case, and museums are here to stay.

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, museums and art galleries are an important

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of urban societies. To a city, those establishments can be important landmarks and an important source of income through tourism. Not to mention that featuring artists in a famous museum can skyrocket their careers.

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, the Guggenheim Museum in New York and the Louvre in Paris are renowned buildings that have featured multiple world-famous artworks.

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, a gallery is not only a place to show

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. It can

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be a famous place of its own.

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, online

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can limit the experience of the art piece. Cameras, microphones and other media between the viewer and the

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can obscure or diminish some attributes that make it unique.

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, one may not fully appreciate the size of

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when viewing it from their screen, or they might miss out on intricate details that the camera could not capture. In conclusion, I believe that artists pour a lot of love into their works, and

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best experienced in person.

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, venues

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, where artwork is exhibited,

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is exhibited remain important landmarks and a large source of income and employment for their cities, and they will not disappear any time soon.

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