Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a possitive or negative development?
The matter of whether drivers can be replaced by automatic machines in the
next
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type of vehicle, users are liable to overuse them, Linking Words
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such
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.
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, I strongly believe that these mentioned disadvantages constitute a far smaller segment compared to various upsides that can be brought to humankind in the future of Use synonyms
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