An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: * Describe the car * Outline the problems it is causing * Tell the Council what you want them to do about it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about the suspicious

car

that is

parked in front of my accommodation. I reckon

this

car

is out of order. So, the

car

has been parked here for the past few weeks.

Furthermore

, I will give you some details about the

car

's appearance so the window has been completely intact and the wheels are seriously damaged

then

the plate number is TL184EN.

Also

, the brand is Fiat Passat.

In addition

, the

car

has been a problem for me and my neighbors. First of all, I have inconvenience when entering the house.

Secondly

, I plan to buy a vehicle that has been occupied by

this

car

Lastly

, residents near me can park their automobiles with hardship. I would highly appreciate it if you eliminate that

car

by the towing company .

This

situation is really annoying. I request that you resolve the problem as soon as possible. I would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Mustafa

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

166 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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