[Detailed report of criminal act in the media can lead to negative effect on society. Therefore news media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?]
In the contemporary era,
news
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the multimedia
am partially support
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partially support
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the forthcoming
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with, the strongest argument in favour of the view point
is that, sometimes broadcast Correct your spelling
viewpoint
media
like,
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e-
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e-news
news
platform to gains higher TRP, they just publish crime news
in exaggerate
way to grab attention from viewers. Change the verb form
exaggerating
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result
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be
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is
about
their Change the preposition
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wrongdoing
wrong doing
and easily find their loophole Correct your spelling
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how
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in how
from
punishment. Change the preposition
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For instance
, the
America published a report about Correct article usage
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details
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detailed
news
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reason, that’s why they could not capture the Add an article
the main
vicited
person. Due to Correct your spelling
visited
this
they also
impose some rules and regulations before telecast anything, the media
should conduct higher authority for approval.
On the other hand
, we cannot forget about positive
sides of Correct article usage
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what
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, for
their informative report help to rise transparency on incidents as well as assist to get just in Change preposition
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short
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a short
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apply
Hence
, in Bangladesh, judicial work was so slow for that reason it is take time to get justice. After intervention
of Add an article
the intervention
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the media
media
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,media
this
picture is change
now. Change the verb form
is changing
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, continuation
of reporting Add an article
a continuation
the continuation
create
pressure on legal people to provide clarity on Change the verb form
creates
investigation
.
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the investigation
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media
play vital
play Correct article usage
a vital
on
society. For Change preposition
in
their
some misdeed cannot reduce their importance on a nation. But Add a comma
,their
government
should pass some strong Add an article
the government
law
on those broadcast Fix the agreement mistake
laws
media
, they cannot allow to publish
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publishing
fake
or Change preposition
of fake
detail
Replace the word
detailed
news
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