Not many young people in countries around the world go to and enjoy concerts and plays. Why is this the case? Should they be encouraged to attend?
The entertainment industry
have
changed the way Change the verb form
has
people
enjoy their free time. They have made several viable options available to us through which people
can while away their time. As a
result
various youngsters these days Add a comma
,result
does
not prefer to go and enjoy shows or plays. There are several reasons for Change the verb form
do
this
, which I will brief in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, its
the comfort zone that matters to most. Numerous young Replace the word
it's
it is
people
in Correct your spelling
today's
todays
world are engrossed in it and they do not want to come out of it. Change to a genitive case
today's
For instance
, availability of several shows to watch within one touch such
as youtube, live video or channels etc. This
engulfs them to sit and enjoy it in their own zone, without being have
to travel far. Change the verb form
having
Secondly
, technological advancement
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advancements
have
made them Change the verb form
has
to
be deprived Change the verb form
apply
from
enjoying any Change the preposition
of
sorts
of art. Fix the agreement mistake
sort
Correct your spelling
Most
Mostly
youth today are so much addicted to social media that they do not seem to care or encourage anything else. Correct your spelling
Most
For example
, instagram
, Change the capitalization
Instagram
facebook
, Change the capitalization
Facebook
twitter
, Change the capitalization
Twitter
snapchat
etc have made Change the capitalization
Snapchat
snap chat
this
generation so busy that they cannot come out of it to appreciate anythingelse
. Correct your spelling
anything else
Moreover
, the stress and struggle in lives
of Correct article usage
the lives
people
have also
taken a toll on them which puts them off to attend such
social gatherings.
However
, this
can be combated by following certain measures such
as; providing free passes, attractive offers on certain deals or free meals provided during the show. As these will eventually attract the youth to attend the shows. Similarly
, companies or firm's hosting such
concerts should reach out the
younger Change preposition
to the
people
and tell them how it would benefit them by just attending this
gathering. This
way they would be encouraged to be a part of the show.
To conclude, attending such
events completely depends on their individual desires. Hence
, this
can be influenced by showing the right track to them.Submitted by vineethec on
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