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All children should be given free laptop when they start high school. Do you agree or disagree?

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advancement
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advancements
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 in teaching methods require personal
gudgets
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gadgets
budgets
 with every learner, I partly advocate it, while some people argue that it is not necessary to provide it for everyone, in
this
 essay I will discuss both
mindset
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. Technology nowadays becoming part of our education system, if every student
have
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 their personal system
then
 they can easily gain surfeit of knowledge without
waisting
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 so much time in waiting for their turn,
secondly
, they easily excess different websites and learn a plethora of technology
such
 as advance level in language courses, they can connect with
overseas
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the overseas
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 student by one click,
for instance
,
pupil
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a pupil
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 who want to
study
 abroad they can easily find out curriculum and other requirements and they can learn them with help of
laptop
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a laptop
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. In
city
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 Orangabad
goveronment
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government
 provided computers to every student at 9th standard and the results were spectacular in 10th standard because they learned easy solutions from websites and prepared for board exams, so it is
helful
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helpful
 for future
students
 to have their own computer. On critics part, people pointing it's drawbacks,
eventhough
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even though
 pointing that it will hamper the
study
, because
students
 will explore things which not related to
study
 like social media, watching reels,
furthermore
 they will play video games whenever they
free
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, they are delicate in nature they are not aware
about
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value
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the value
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 of time so that they will spend plenty of time on social media and playing which will
affects
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 their studies in future,
for example
, parents who
providing
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provide
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 mobile phones in early age to the kids, it usually distracted them from
study
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a study
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such
 as, many
students
 on social platform busy in making videos, addicted to
increase
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 followers and that not good for their studies, so if they providing
such
gudgets
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gadgets
budgets
survillence
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surveillance
 should be required. In conclusion, laptops are
necessary
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 evil,
however
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 it is beneficial if
students
 using
it
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them
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 under observation
otherwise
 it can be harmful, in my opinion in future requirement of some application which can help parents to observe their kids activity.
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