A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

Dear Victor, Hope
this
letter finds you in good health and spirit. I sure
also
would like to thank you for trusting me with
such
an important matter. So, here is what I have to say in response to your queries about the
Pharmacy
course at Monash
University
. I understand that you
also
want to pursue a bachelor degree in
Pharmacy
from Monash
University
which I attended. By the way,
pharmacy
is not an easy subject since it involves very complex techniques and skills of preparing and dispensing medicines or drugs, and
thus
saving human life
also
. Students attending
pharmacy
degrees will learn how different types of drugs affect the human body and mind and how they interact when mixed together. Of course, the good thing is that the
university
, you are choosing, has some of the best
pharmacy
syllabuses, faculty members and laboratory facilities to teach you just what you need to succeed. So, just visit the
university
website at www.monash.edu to learn more about how to apply online, or just call the admission officer to ask him or her to send you the admission form and other necessary papers in the mail, if you want to proceed
further
. Take care. See you soon. Warm wishes, Mitchel
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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