It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

Nowadays there is an upward trend

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delinquency rate. Some people say

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is because

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flourishing in the

media

industry which sometimes contains violent content, and

such

unhealthy contexts can influence immature

children

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. In my opinion, I totally agree with

this

idea and think that it is better to have

parents

' accompanying when

children

are watching TV or using social

media

;

furthermore

, violent content on these

media

should be strictly restricted by the authority.

To begin

with, the

media

should take the greatest responsibility

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juvenile crime because they spread inadequate information without categorizing their users.

As a result

,

these bad information

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can easily be seen by

children

who are mentally immature and have less knowledge to recognize things' right and wrong.

For example

, according to the authority's research, in

Taiwan

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up to 70 per cent of students in elementary

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schools

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shools

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schools

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will

imidate

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imitate

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public figures' ways of speaking and

behaviors

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, for just wanting to be like them.

Consequently

, some bad behaviours

such

as bullying or discriminating can happen in the school or on the internet. In order to deal

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problems mentioned above,

parents

' accompanying and

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strict censorship from the government will be important all the more.

Firstly

,

parents

have to spend some time

to watch

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TV or browse websites with their

children

, taking

this

opportunity to assist them with developing the ability to tell right from wrong.

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, even

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unhealthy behaviour or speaking has been exposed to the

children

, the harmful effect on them can be enormously minimized.

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to

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comprehensive censorship from the government is able to effectively curb

the

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juvenile delinquency because

this

is the easiest and quickest way to thoroughly eradicate inadequate messages on all kinds of

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media

. In conclusion, unhealthy

contents

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content

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from the

media

should be blamed for encouraging

children

to commit

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crime

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, and an adequate education from

parents

and a stringent regulation introduced by the government can ease

this

problem.