What do you consider to be your greatest career achievement so far? Why?

There are a lot of career
achievements
I have made so far after joining the cooperate world. My greatest professional
achievements
are turning around the success of the
last
employer by raise funding by developing prototypes app at the right point when the company needed funds, help in building the
software
department and delivering solutions in a limited
time
. These
achievements
, I consider being the greatest in my professional career.
Firstly
, working in a startup culture help me to make a complete engineer who can mould himself as per the need of the company.
For instance
, we were short of funds for the
next
milestone. So, we were aiming to raise funds by showing a prototype. I was working as a
software
developer and delivered an Android App.
Finally
, our team presented the app as a demo in the world biggest Consumer Electronics(CS) show, Vegas, to the potential customers and investors.
Finally
, we had raised money of 75 million for the development of our Electrical Vehicle Car.
Additionally
, joined a start-up at a very early stage where got a chance to hire smart people to deliver the
software
in a limited
time
.
For example
, I worked a start-up Byton, I joined the company along with my director on the same day. We were only 2 guys and later we built a team of 75 employees within the span of 6 months. We built the
software
team vertically and horizontally and delivered the
software
solution inside a car before any other department.
This
teaches you a new lesson that helps you delivered a solution in a limited
time
. To conclude, joining small companies and raising money to achieve common goals are the biggest achievement to deliver a product at right
time
. Those
achievements
are not helping me but helping the complete organization.
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