47. Write a letter to the hotel manager about bad experience you had while staying there. Include the following in your letter: Where and when did you stay? What had happened? Suggesta solution for the situation.

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Dear sir, My name is Upinder Kaur and I

has been

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stayed in your

hotel

for five nights from October 21 to October 26. I am writing

this

letter to

complainabout

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complain about

the services throughout my stay. My tour to Canada was awesome except

the

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hotel

. Several difficulties are faced by me in your

hotel

Firstly

, the front desk team was so rude when I tried to ask some questions about the

hotel

Moreover

although

the room was beautiful and clean,

however

, the washroom was not hygienic. There were lots of hair in the bathtub. When I made a call to Royal Service and informed them of my issue, they blamed me for

this

. Undoubtedly, the food was tasty,

however

, the cutlery was not washed properly. It is my suggestion to keep an eye on your staff. Every member of the team is not bad,

however

,there are some who do not treat their guests in good ways.

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should

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the room before

guest

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check-in

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. I feel it better to write you a letter personally rather than posting a review on

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google. I hope you will take care of it so that others do not face any problem. Yours faithfully, Upinder Kaur

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Coherence and Cohesion

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Task Achievement

While the task response is mostly handled well, ensure the letter addresses the manager directly and any requested solution is clearly stated.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a clear beginning, middle, and end, maintaining a logical structure throughout.

Task Achievement

The tone is appropriately formal and respectful for addressing a hotel manager about service issues.

Task Achievement

Use of personal experiences and specific examples adds weight to the complaint, making it more persuasive.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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