Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In order that people can communicate
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other, learning to speak their language is very important. But what if we are just new to
this
country, how can we talk to them?
This
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will discuss that it can cause serious social and practical problems for the people
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to all the foreigners.
To begin
with, living in
a
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different
places
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needs time to adapt which includes clothing, food, values, traditions and
languange
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language
. Miscommunication is
one
of the serious problems for the people who shifted to
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another country
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. Aside from
english
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, there are other places that can only converse using their mother tongue to talk
such
as, french,
italian
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, german,
arabic
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,
russian
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,
chinese
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,
korean
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and many more.
In addition
to that, some places in the world
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to use only
one
for their comfort.
Furthermore
, social and practical issues are common because of misunderstanding that causes different
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to both the speaker and the listener.
For example
, there is a new
guy
who is transferred to Saudi Arabia to work, since he is new, he learned only the basic term of
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that he can use during
at
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work.
One
day, an Arab
guy
ask what he is doing, the
guy
answered back using the terms he knew, that the machine is "
karbota
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Kubota
" that he needs to fix it. The
arab
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guy
suddenly became angry and started to shout at the
guy
.
Manager
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went and asked what happened, the
guy
explained that the machine is not working and needs to be fixed. So the
guy
used "
karbota
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Kubota
"
instead
of "
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" which means not functioning, the
first
one
defines as crazy. Using terms
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which
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we are not familiar
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causes trouble to the person who really knows their words. In conclusion, having
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interest to learn their cultures especially how they talk is a way of respecting them. It can
also
help us to blend in, in their society but we should
also
think that It
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also
depends on how they interpret each
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words and how we use it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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