Some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people is to pay according to their work. Do you agree or disagree?

According to some viewpoints, the strategy when staff is paid equal to their job may encourage people to

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better. In my opinion

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of all, is fairer,

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, could bring positive influence to

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’s financial results. A salary

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, when people get paid according to the

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, which they have done, can help a

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to escape from unneeded expenses and bring a positive impact to

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as a whole. If the

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preferred

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strategy of working, each staff member would

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harder. Under these circumstances, workplace productivity could sharply

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, quality of released products could be rise, which let the

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achieve positive results. At the same time,

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can help to decrease salary expenses, because each effective employee could replace several employees, who are working less effectively. And one of the clear evidence of

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efficiency is the success of companies, like Google, Apple, Microsoft. These companies are widely known as those who use discussed salary policy.

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,

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prosperity correlates with the

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of government revenue. Because, if

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income

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, tax expenses

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proportionally, and taxes take place the large part of government revenue.

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, the impact of

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success would be the stability of the economy at a country level.

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could help to raise social benefits. In

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way, if some person lost their job because he or she could not

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hard, due to physical condition, their well-being would not suffer. Eventually, the condition of each individuum and the economic unit will be improving to better, because economic stability contributes to society's prosperity. One example, which could be illustrated in

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process, is the period of the industrial revolution when the success of separate businesses had led to the growth of the country's economy as a whole. According to above mentioned

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account, scheme, when people are paid according to their

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is equally good for

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and separate individual. In my opinion,

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is not only fairer, but it has

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a positive economic influence on society's wealth.