You would like to join the local orchestra Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: - Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice - Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate - Express your enthusiasm for music Write 150 words .
Dear Sir,
This
is James Austin from the Newyorkshire area , I am writing this
letter to express my willingness to join your orchestra group as a jazz player.Basically , I am having a good knowledge of drums and violin also
.
Let me explain to you, that I have worked earlier in a famous orchestra band
called Big Bang for about a year .Basically,one of the band
members suffered a stroke and others migrated to different places so I was left with no option except to leave the band
as it was not possible for me to manage shows independently.Moreover
, we have been awarded a lot of prizes for our performance at a local level.In addition
to this
, I have also
done trade certifications in music so the credentials I possess will be a valuable asset for your local band
.
Lastly
, it’s my passion for music that I want to continue further
in this
field.Moreover
, joining your band
will enhance my skills on other instruments also
as I have heard a lot about your orchestra from one of my friends.It will be my humble pleasure if I am given a chance to perform in your ring.
Awaiting a response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
JagjitSubmitted by dr.jotdhaliwal on
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