Advances in technologies and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree?
Today, modern technologies and automation are contributing majority
in
our community. But why Change preposition
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working hours still the same? Add an auxiliary verb
are individuals
This
essay,
will discuss Remove the comma
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about
how labourers are still important in these advances that our generation benefitsRemove the preposition
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.
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To begin
with, the public is aware of what new inventions are affecting to
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the
society. Correct article usage
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For example
, house chores can be finished in just a snap because of gadgets such
as vacuum cleaner, automatic washing machine, rice dispenser, dish washer
and many more. At work, comparing before sending messages is convenient to anyone, they can use email, chat and call using their phones and computers. These advances Correct your spelling
dishwasher
helps
everyone to make their tasks easy in Change the verb form
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of
time. Change preposition
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In addition
, automation machines are produced for the people, they made it accessible to all, which they can dispense money, buy products like sodas, food, make up
, toys and many more in just one drop of Join the words
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Furthermore
, even it is timely to have all of these, they are still in need of manpower. Robots and big machineries
are made but humans are still the operators of these. Behind all Change the wording
machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
what
we are experiencing it is the great minds of all the inventors and workers to make it possible. Correct pronoun usage
that
That is
why working hours is
not reduced.
In my conclusion, manual labourers are needed Change the verb form
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what we want to achieve. We are the brains and hands of all Change preposition
for
this
modernised world. Even we became dependable on these, they have the limitations that humans are the only capable in
doing it.Change preposition
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