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While some argue that the internet is a blessing as it helps with information, others think that it is not necessary to have such smount of information.What is your opinion?

#argue #internet #information #smount
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In the
last
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 20 years, society has experienced a huge change in the way things are done.
This
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 change has a name, The
Internet
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. the amount of
information
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 and tools that users can use from websites is priceless.
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, in the 90´s and early 2000, if
people
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 need any piece of
information
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 about anything, they had to go to libraries and deal with all those piles of books. Sometimes, the library would not have the book that have the
information
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 or someone else was using it. While with the
Internet
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 everyone can access the same
information
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 at the same time and from all over the world.
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, thanks to
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 a kid from Bangladesh can read the newest
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 about something happening thousands of miles away.
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, the
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,
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 often put on the
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, is free access,
this
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 allows so many
people
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 without resources to learn something or get educated in something they want to know. In the past,
people
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 could not afford to learn about something because it was only taught in the best universities but now that has changed. With a computer,
internet
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 broadband and time anyone can learn everything and
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 great. So, in conclusion, I am of the opinion that a big improvement has occurred in the
last
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 twenty years where
people
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 are able to get
information
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 from the other side of the world and there is not a limit in the number of users for
this
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information
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.
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